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The problem
I sat there in the corner
And I watched her mingle with friends
She was happy.
I sat there for hours and she never said a thing to me
And when we got home.
She said "for a second there, I had forgotten about my problems"
And I watched her mingle with friends
She was happy.
I sat there for hours and she never said a thing to me
And when we got home.
She said "for a second there, I had forgotten about my problems"
Published 10th Jan 2024
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10th Jan 2024 6:33pm
You told a sobering tale my South African King utilizing six lines, and it resonated long after the last letter was read.
It's a new year, and I am praying for you better days ahead and a brighter future in all your universal affairs.
It's a new year, and I am praying for you better days ahead and a brighter future in all your universal affairs.
22nd Feb 2024 3:20pm
18th Jan 2024 3:41pm
Hii , a lovely wonderful poem, maybe you can solve those problems for her. Kudos.
Hey and we are of those thousands proud of south African leadership to feel empowered enough to speak up for the poor Palestinians, for justice and humanity and not be intimidated into silence.
You are the true heroic world super power amd not those who rain bombs everywhere.
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Hey and we are of those thousands proud of south African leadership to feel empowered enough to speak up for the poor Palestinians, for justice and humanity and not be intimidated into silence.
You are the true heroic world super power amd not those who rain bombs everywhere.
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
22nd Feb 2024 3:21pm
Hey it's good to see another mzansi here...
Well there's quite a few of us here..
And we very proud and courageous...
I'll surely read your poetry
Well there's quite a few of us here..
And we very proud and courageous...
I'll surely read your poetry
