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Untitled Love Poem I
His mouth erased the syllables from mine
until it was only his name I could remember;
too dumb to speak, I used my hands.
until it was only his name I could remember;
too dumb to speak, I used my hands.
Published 10th Jan 2024
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Anonymous
10th Jan 2024 5:23pm
Like writing a new chapter when it comes to love and romance.
I like the little metaphor used.
I like the little metaphor used.
10th Jan 2024 5:42pm
Anonymous
10th Jan 2024 5:43pm
Anytime
welcome to DUP.
welcome to DUP.
10th Jan 2024 7:58pm
10th Jan 2024 9:34pm
10th Jan 2024 10:17pm
Hello Janis E! Welcome to DUP!
You capture this super intimate, romantic moment beautifully. Brava!
You capture this super intimate, romantic moment beautifully. Brava!
19th Mar 2024 1:41pm
