Lament

enjoy your coffee delia

Thank you, I am.
Thanks for your continued support.

I really like this alot. You wear the darkness well. Great poem!

Thanks, u made me smile
So happy to hear you liked it.
I wasn't sure about this one, lol

You needent have worried. It's fantastic! You have a wonderful way with words!

❤️ thanks I need the love today

i find this pretty darn deep and sorrowful. there's an element of numbness from past loss and the trials of depressive thoughts. this is very sad.

I'm very sad, so it's a reflection of myself. I take care of my very sick mother & it obviously shows in my writing and also healing from past pain.
Thank you for your continued support
My writing shifts from light to dark.....

i'm sorry to hear about your mom. that can be very rough.

Thank you 🤗

Feels a bit like my haunted nights. Very relatable...espresso or not. Melancholy & subdued

You understand. Thank you for reading and relating.

The image of angels weeping & monsters competing is quite powerful. Sets a very specific somber tone

Thank you for your feedback! Means so much

Quality write
Cadence and flow
4 bagger home run in baseball terms

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You made my day! Thank you so much. 😊

Is that a run with bases loaded? Lol

No, that's a Grand Slam

A 4 bagger just means you run around all 4 bases and then come home.  Still good, any home run is good 👍

Hmmm. I want to write a grand slam, lol
Have a great night!
My dad loved baseball.

Keep working it, you'll get there sooner than you think ..

Pretty expressive and metaphorical, as well as emotionally analogous.  I feel as though I can see a bit of your struggle in the quest of life through this.  It comes across to me Kind of like you have desires that you seem to battle with.  Weighing choice and consequence, as well as judgment, can often bring out the subconscious motive and intent, which goes subsequentially unseen, until conscience or morality kicks in.  That's when regret and reality come to the surface.  You've been through those emotional cycles and patterns, but still you yearn, which is a lot of what you convey, at least to me.  Anyway, to me, it seems as though you're writing from the heart about such struggle, which may be more than just eroticism or strong want.  Such can run, and cut, pretty deep, heh.  That's just some of my take.  Thanks for sharing!

The struggles come from my soul, through my heart, to my mind and then the pen.  You are correct in saying a lot of what I feel emotionally goes into the poems. More than meets the eye!
I totally appreciate your thoughts always. You seem to understand me, even what I may try to hide, lol
Thank you for always supporting & encouraging me.

You're welcome.

AMAZING!

My reply is always going to be.....like you 😊

Thank you kindly. I truly appreciate how kind people are to me on this site. Like mutual respects. Something you don't find on Instagram, lol

Nope, we sure ain’t no Instagram🤣