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Spirits we are
I know her
as the wind
and I
a leaf
when I fell
she picked me up,
took me
far away.
In my slow death,
she caressed me
until once again
I rose
somewhere else.
She never
leaves me.
as the wind
and I
a leaf
when I fell
she picked me up,
took me
far away.
In my slow death,
she caressed me
until once again
I rose
somewhere else.
She never
leaves me.
Written by
Dragonblood
Published 6th Jan 2024
| Edited 9th Nov 2024
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Re. Spirits we are
6th Jan 2024 6:38pm
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Re. Spirits we are
6th Jan 2024 7:38pm
I love how you positioned the texts visually, in your metaphor to motion of blowing leaf!!
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