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The light
white stream
of the moon
is moving
towards
the
fogy morning...
His
fingers
are moving
in my hair...
My head
is resting
on his
massive chest...
The
whole room
is filled with
the fragrance
of our musical love...
The feelings
of two people
have blossomed...
Our aura
feeling
tickled by
the whispers
of gentle promises...
The bright
light of our love
is shining on
the cover of
incompleteness...
white stream
of the moon
is moving
towards
the
fogy morning...
His
fingers
are moving
in my hair...
My head
is resting
on his
massive chest...
The
whole room
is filled with
the fragrance
of our musical love...
The feelings
of two people
have blossomed...
Our aura
feeling
tickled by
the whispers
of gentle promises...
The bright
light of our love
is shining on
the cover of
incompleteness...
Published 2nd Jan 2024
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2nd Jan 2024 3:49pm
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Anonymous
2nd Jan 2024 4:49pm
What an amazing poem. And that last stanza punctuated it perfectly
3rd Jan 2024 4:41pm
Lovely beautiful poem which so fits the picture, romantic and sexy. Favourite verses:
The
whole room
is filled with
the fragrance
of our musical love...
The bright
light of our love
is shining on
the cover of
incompleteness...[or should it be the incompleteness of (clothing) cover? LOL]
If this is for a lover in real life I'm sure he would enjoy receiving that.
The
whole room
is filled with
the fragrance
of our musical love...
The bright
light of our love
is shining on
the cover of
incompleteness...[or should it be the incompleteness of (clothing) cover? LOL]
If this is for a lover in real life I'm sure he would enjoy receiving that.
3rd Jan 2024 4:39pm
Yeaaaa this is written for someone.. where it was necessary to remove the covering of clothes to achieve orgasm..😉
2nd Jan 2024 8:12pm
Paint it! Captivating read. I bet this was fun to write. It's one of those poems you can crawl into and relax in despite the "Do not disturb" sign on the door.
3rd Jan 2024 4:36pm
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4th Jan 2024 2:29am
I'm curious as to why you chose "incompleteness" instead of completeness. As in the complete would hint at things being whole now. Solid, etc.
But, it's your write, with your own thoughts to motivate you to use what words fit.
And it's a beautiful, tender write. I like this type from you.
But, it's your write, with your own thoughts to motivate you to use what words fit.
And it's a beautiful, tender write. I like this type from you.
4th Jan 2024 4:29am
The light of our love has covered the incompleteness... means the cover of incompleteness is now no longer there..only the divine light of fulfillment is shining...
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