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WrItten In A Fortune Cookie
"There is no chance evil can exist
in an individual as a force
Who is beauty minded."
The message is clear
and may you always
seek beauty and
walk a path of kindness
and compassion
May your intentions be pure
and you always give others
the joy of pleasure instead
of merely trying to please
in an individual as a force
Who is beauty minded."
The message is clear
and may you always
seek beauty and
walk a path of kindness
and compassion
May your intentions be pure
and you always give others
the joy of pleasure instead
of merely trying to please
Published 2nd Jan 2024
Author's Note
Words can prompt me to write something from time to time as well. The above is what came about after cracking open my fortune cookie after eating my New Year's delivered meal from China Park Restaurant.
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2nd Jan 2024 11:16am
Love this... how the prompt came to you... but more importantly what you did with it... Happy New Year Faith...
2nd Jan 2024 11:49am
Well, Lil, I have to say you have made my day already and it's only just begun. Thank you for your wonderful response to my poem. I've always believed that no matter what may be going on at the time that there must be a poem in here somewhere. It's my connection to life. Happy New Year, dear lady.
Faith
Faith
2nd Jan 2024 12:18pm
The fact that fortune cookies haven't gone digital is a miracle in itself. Great write with a personal touch ...
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2nd Jan 2024 12:46pm
Thank you so much for your wonderful remarks! I appreciate them very much!
2nd Jan 2024 2:15pm
Nature is life's Fortune Cookie and if taken care of will sweeten the air of humanity.
2nd Jan 2024 4:52pm
2nd Jan 2024 2:21pm
Excellent. Yes, there are so many ways to encourage and be encouraged.Thanks for sharing and may this New Year unfold with new fortunes for you. XO
2nd Jan 2024 4:14pm
First - love Chinese food! 😊
This was a breath of the freshest air.
I so agree. Stop people pleasing and take joy in just being with people. Not everyone is going to like you, that's ok.
Lovely sentiments.
This was a breath of the freshest air.
I so agree. Stop people pleasing and take joy in just being with people. Not everyone is going to like you, that's ok.
Lovely sentiments.
3rd Jan 2024 5:42am
Dear F,
Brilliant! I absolutely love how the inspiration for this poem came about. Honestly, the fortune cookie is the best part of Chinese food. The message of this lovely write is so wonderful. Whenever I feel agitated I’ll be referring back to this for sure. X
H🌷
Brilliant! I absolutely love how the inspiration for this poem came about. Honestly, the fortune cookie is the best part of Chinese food. The message of this lovely write is so wonderful. Whenever I feel agitated I’ll be referring back to this for sure. X
H🌷
3rd Jan 2024 11:43am
8th Jan 2024 4:36pm
I too appreciated your further explanation, interpretation or indeed homily of that delicious cookie. What a find! I hope you enjoyed the meal also! 😊
17th Jan 2024 11:09pm
You are a "cookie" with wisdom and fortune.
Enjoyed the poem and its message.
Enjoyed the poem and its message.
