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Rain II
Bare face to grey sky
Cool drops sparkle sensation
Reminders of life
Cool drops sparkle sensation
Reminders of life
Published 1st Jan 2024
Author's Note
Just taking time to enjoy the little things.
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1st Jan 2024 1:36am
I closed my eyes after I read this and savored the image. Happy New Year, my friend.
Here’s to the little things.
Here’s to the little things.
1st Jan 2024 2:07am
1st Jan 2024 9:55am
Dear H,
I re-read your comments and copied them into my journal. I wanted to share how much it means that you closed your eyes to experience the feeling of the poem - that is the ultimate praise. 🌹
I re-read your comments and copied them into my journal. I wanted to share how much it means that you closed your eyes to experience the feeling of the poem - that is the ultimate praise. 🌹
1st Jan 2024 1:30pm
1st Jan 2024 3:39am
Dear T,
I enjoyed the reminder of the little things as they always seem to anchor the big things so much better. Lovely write full of texture and images. H🌷
I enjoyed the reminder of the little things as they always seem to anchor the big things so much better. Lovely write full of texture and images. H🌷
1st Jan 2024 10:00am
Dear H,
Thank you for reading and commenting. I have found that the appreciation of little events in a day have been important to help me subdue anxiety by embracing the good.
Thank you for reading and commenting. I have found that the appreciation of little events in a day have been important to help me subdue anxiety by embracing the good.
