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i will find you
in my dreams
and finally
hold you
and know you
and not care
who sees,
who judges
and i’ll see only you
and love only you
and be like you
will you swallow me
devour me
hold me inside
that i might be
in and of you
now and always?
in my dreams
and finally
hold you
and know you
and not care
who sees,
who judges
and i’ll see only you
and love only you
and be like you
will you swallow me
devour me
hold me inside
that i might be
in and of you
now and always?
Published 30th Dec 2023
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30th Dec 2023 7:24pm
Ok. This has a kickass retro feel to it. Smooth, sensual, need dripping.
It reminds me of e.e. cummings, in tone more than form, but the tone is spot on.
There’s a knot in the belly in this poem, and it leaves the reader in a state of anticipation. Kickass!
It reminds me of e.e. cummings, in tone more than form, but the tone is spot on.
There’s a knot in the belly in this poem, and it leaves the reader in a state of anticipation. Kickass!
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