Pleasure Principle

I think I need to get your coffee brand. This was highly...stimulating. beautifully written!

Aww thank you.
It was Nature's Promise Breakfast Blend with gingerbread creamer, lol
What's a world without sex and coffee!
Have an amazing day 😊

Beautiful poem.. and best reply ever!  I don't know if there's anything better..??  Those are two of my favorite things!
Have another cup for me!
~Christopher

Two of my favorite too.
Thank u for commenting!

Don't get me started with espresso 🔥

so wonderful delia

Your comments are wonderful 😊 🎄
Thank you.

Pssst...
ever = every


“The pound of your heart drips glossy droplets remaining of me”
I think you need a transitional word in there somewhere, an article or something :)


Your eyes brilliant fires,
to sensually scorch, centuries deep,
forbidden desires.
Moaning breath is an orgasmic choir.

Again, love the soft hits in rhyme. Fires, desires, choir.

The apocalypse of inhibition,
drives you hard.
Into my pleasurable oblivion.
Take me all night, make my trembling
naked flesh....your ultimate sin.

And also inhibition, oblivion and sin. I like those hits.

SMOKING’ girl! You go with your bad self. I’m in high-nerd form right now, so throw any bad advice out the window and ignore the rest. Great work!

Hi Betty, you are right girl, I did kinda leave out a word there. Thank you for your feedback. I don't think I hold a candle to any of the erotica on here, I like to try though.
Have a great night!

Was the coffee piping hot when you were done writing?

Deep rooted desire bubbling to the surface. Enjoyable erotic write, could feel your passion building.

Oh yes, scalding hot!
Thank you. Erotica is not my strong suit, lol.
I'm glad you enjoyed. 😊
Have a great night!

damn it Delia you're on fire here
I'm in awe 💕

You make me smile in my darkest moments.
Makes me so happy you liked it ❤️

This is hot... in principle! 😉😜

Yup only in principle here, haha
Thank you for checking out, you also, always make me smile. 🤗

Opening lines set the tone. You carried it perfectly through to a fantastic conclusion. Your coffee thoughts are stirring

Why thank you very much.
Happy magical holidays!

Wow… another cup of dark roast… please

😊 thanks.
Lil, we got a Starbucks now 1/4 mile away!

You need to be taken to be paradise all night and day long.  Keep on writing.

😊 I know right, I should be in paradise, lol
Thank you for reading - and have happy holidays.

You also have a great holiday with your friends and love ones.

Hi I didn't see your comment, wishing you a very happy new year!

Thank you ever so much!
I really appreciate your comments