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An Understanding
Painful understanding ugly is beautiful
ripped from my heart my knowing
I ache with the hurt
it is a part of me
Silently keening in a day too bright for me
colorful regrets shining
The green of jealousy
the blue of melancholy
the reds of sex and anger
Intricately connected feelings
an intimate relationship of emotions
playing off each other
provoking one another
Lust ensues in all her masochistic glory
when jealousy is pricked by the Sadist
control is key when manipulating sex
Too much will get you nothing but frustrated
but a tender reprisal gets arousal
When the other feelings come into play
What a beautiful moment
Published 12th Dec 2023
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13th Dec 2023 00:12am
13th Dec 2023 00:23am
hello beautiful Willow thank you graciously my friend I deeply appreciate your thoughts 💕
13th Dec 2023 1:28am
13th Dec 2023 1:54am
good evening dearest Poet I'm happy you liked this one thank you for such a beautiful comment making my evening brighter 💕
13th Dec 2023 2:35am
I like what Willow said. I agree.
The whole thing is notable, especially the choice of colors to depict the mood.
Well written Crims! You really put some excellent lines throughout this .
The whole thing is notable, especially the choice of colors to depict the mood.
Well written Crims! You really put some excellent lines throughout this .
13th Dec 2023 2:43am
hello dearest Styxian good evening thank you most graciously I'm happy this spoke to you it's a dynamic I've noticed between my husband and I 💕
Anonymous
13th Dec 2023 6:28am
'' Too much will get you nothing but frustrated
but a tender reprisal gets arousal
When the other feelings come into play ''
...perhaps the point of no return?
This is a poetic teaser indeed, Brenda
but a tender reprisal gets arousal
When the other feelings come into play ''
...perhaps the point of no return?
This is a poetic teaser indeed, Brenda
13th Dec 2023 7:41pm
good afternoon dearest Naajir perhaps Soul Soldier perhaps to the point of no return thank you graciously 💕
30th Dec 2023 9:14pm
"Too much will get you nothing but frustrated
but a tender reprisal gets arousal"
True words. It's like oversaturation.
Excellent spill.
but a tender reprisal gets arousal"
True words. It's like oversaturation.
Excellent spill.
