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Half Written
My notebooks are all filled
With incomplete dreams
Hobbies picked up and
Forgotten
Why can’t I seem
To stay persistent
What will consume my interest
I’ll probably leave this
Poem half
With incomplete dreams
Hobbies picked up and
Forgotten
Why can’t I seem
To stay persistent
What will consume my interest
I’ll probably leave this
Poem half
Published 20th Nov 2023
| Edited 8th Aug 2024
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20th Nov 2023 10:09pm
This reads like my life, I swear. If this truly is half written, it's perfect as is
21st Nov 2023 10:51pm
22nd Nov 2023 5:43pm
Sometimes it’s okay not to finish. The finality of completion can be daunting. As long as we’re alive everything is a work in progress. Great poem!
24th Nov 2023 7:38pm
29th Dec 2023 9:33pm
A sentiment much recognised. I've come to the conclusion that all dreams/projects in life have to be done for their own sake - a moment at a time - in that way they can never be 'half-finished'. Having said that, I still don't find it easy :))
29th Dec 2023 9:39pm
