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DOG
ordinary
as me, this one--
part one thing
and another,
saved
from ruin
and still
aching
for love,
always
waiting,
wanting
there is
nobility
in mongrel blood,
a hybrid
soul
behind eyes
deep
as sky
but brown
as earth
things
said
but not spoken
a heart
designed
to love
as me, this one--
part one thing
and another,
saved
from ruin
and still
aching
for love,
always
waiting,
wanting
there is
nobility
in mongrel blood,
a hybrid
soul
behind eyes
deep
as sky
but brown
as earth
things
said
but not spoken
a heart
designed
to love
Published 16th Nov 2023
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16th Nov 2023 11:55am
16th Nov 2023 1:03pm
Anonymous
16th Nov 2023 1:34pm
Incredible loyalty and compassion in a dog's love. Can't find that in a lot of humans. Very well said
16th Nov 2023 7:41pm
17th Nov 2023 6:15am
Dear J,
“things
said
but not spoken” I loved this phrase. I like to think as humans this can happen also but I think mostly between human and pet. I enjoyed your homage to mans best friend. Very sweet piece. H🌷
“things
said
but not spoken” I loved this phrase. I like to think as humans this can happen also but I think mostly between human and pet. I enjoyed your homage to mans best friend. Very sweet piece. H🌷
17th Nov 2023 11:19pm
18th Nov 2023 1:57am
DOG is GOD backwards. You are being watched! The way a person treats a dog is huge indicator of personality, in other words. Thanks for the love.
18th Nov 2023 2:28am
