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bridge over water
bridge
over water,
i'm positioned
high,
well enough
high
not to drown,
expand
my reach,
grab a hold
of
each side,
fingers
and toes
anchor
into the dirt,
deep enough
to keep
hearts steady,
souls walk
through me,
on me,
permission
granted,
come be
my reason.
over water,
i'm positioned
high,
well enough
high
not to drown,
expand
my reach,
grab a hold
of
each side,
fingers
and toes
anchor
into the dirt,
deep enough
to keep
hearts steady,
souls walk
through me,
on me,
permission
granted,
come be
my reason.
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Re. bridge over water
5th Nov 2023 2:02pm
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Re. bridge over water
5th Nov 2023 2:51pm
I love the metaphor of the bridge as maybe a path to the heart.
I loved the way this one ended.
I loved the way this one ended.
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5th Nov 2023 4:47pm
Re. bridge over water
5th Nov 2023 3:01pm
I read this as helping others prevents you from drowning as well. Regardless if I'm off, it's intriguing and beautiful.
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Re: Re. bridge over water
5th Nov 2023 4:48pm
thank you Pink, whatever you read and get from this, you can't be wrong.
Re. bridge over water
5th Nov 2023 3:23pm
I really felt strength and determination amidst hardship.... probably reading into it but that's just my little 2 cents....lol...
Love the metaphoric use, J
Great read.
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Love the metaphoric use, J
Great read.
🌹💙
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Anonymous
5th Nov 2023 6:20pm
There's a lot tucked away in this one. Very well done!
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