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dark secrets
she used
the
sharp razor
to cut
words
into
her flesh,
hoping
that he
would read
and understand
her messages,
obeying them
this time,
PRIVATE
NO TOUCHING
NO TRESPASSING
the
sharp razor
to cut
words
into
her flesh,
hoping
that he
would read
and understand
her messages,
obeying them
this time,
PRIVATE
NO TOUCHING
NO TRESPASSING
Published 2nd Nov 2023
| Edited 3rd Nov 2023
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2nd Nov 2023 10:32pm
Damn impactful.
From one who’s been there, sometimes you feel so desperate you’ll do anything to survive.
Excellent write.
From one who’s been there, sometimes you feel so desperate you’ll do anything to survive.
Excellent write.
3rd Nov 2023 1:54am
5th Nov 2023 1:32pm
From my own previous experiences seeing and working daily with domestic violence victims, there's sometimes a huge need for taking a sense of power back from an abuser, often by any means one might feel is necessary.... That's the he sense I get from this piece....
It's a message that is stark, yes.....yet it's deeply valuable in it's poetic efforts in highlighting the struggles and the ongoing plights of those who have been through things most of us probably couldn't even imagine...
Excellent observational ink, J.
Thanks for sharing
🌹
It's a message that is stark, yes.....yet it's deeply valuable in it's poetic efforts in highlighting the struggles and the ongoing plights of those who have been through things most of us probably couldn't even imagine...
Excellent observational ink, J.
Thanks for sharing
🌹
5th Nov 2023 4:42pm
thank you Blue, keep helping out, i'm sure that you are making a difference.
