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Paper Boat Over A Sea Of Ink
Paper Boat And Sea Of Ink
As a child, roaming the wild
Chasing the bird, on ev'ry ride
As a child, a sling by my side
On donkeys' bare back,
On every blazing eventide
And while on Summers' hot darker nights
Under its black wing, or in the moonlight
While There was ever a creepy crawl
hours past midnight, then we'd stroll
Into barley fields, we were marauders
Sneakers at high noon, adventurers
No risk of being caught, daredevils
And when rains would pour from gutters
We build our own boats, left to float on waters
Shipshape papers, handicrafts origami
To take our wishes into the farthest sea
Inked with poetry lessons at school
Sent sailing into the streaming pools
Knowing that destination is somewhere
When they moor at some country shore
With our poetry and best wishes aboard
https://youtu.be/y1DEFyIQpAs
As a child, roaming the wild
Chasing the bird, on ev'ry ride
As a child, a sling by my side
On donkeys' bare back,
On every blazing eventide
And while on Summers' hot darker nights
Under its black wing, or in the moonlight
While There was ever a creepy crawl
hours past midnight, then we'd stroll
Into barley fields, we were marauders
Sneakers at high noon, adventurers
No risk of being caught, daredevils
And when rains would pour from gutters
We build our own boats, left to float on waters
Shipshape papers, handicrafts origami
To take our wishes into the farthest sea
Inked with poetry lessons at school
Sent sailing into the streaming pools
Knowing that destination is somewhere
When they moor at some country shore
With our poetry and best wishes aboard
https://youtu.be/y1DEFyIQpAs
Published 4th Nov 2023
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4th Nov 2023 9:19pm
5th Nov 2023 11:38am
If we recall the past in all its memory, we would never be wicked and sick, and depressed,
Thanks my friend for your constant support,
A pleasure on my page.
Thanks my friend for your constant support,
A pleasure on my page.
5th Nov 2023 4:04pm
I do love the carefree feelings in this. That childhood excitement...
Always discovering, always inspired by something.
And then to create something like paper boats, origami, or whatever comes next
as we sail those boats on to the next destination of life.
I really enjoyed your inspirational writing poeticdelight.
Always discovering, always inspired by something.
And then to create something like paper boats, origami, or whatever comes next
as we sail those boats on to the next destination of life.
I really enjoyed your inspirational writing poeticdelight.
5th Nov 2023 4:10pm
Indeed, Kristina; We miss the childhood times, just carefree; innocent,
just the brain is far from making much torment to oneself,;
But if we dont enjoy childhood, i assure you, we would be depressed, sad, we dont have a memory resort to return to, for venting our sadness in this world of mere perdition.
your visit is so greatly appreciated my friend.
Happiness and Peace.
just the brain is far from making much torment to oneself,;
But if we dont enjoy childhood, i assure you, we would be depressed, sad, we dont have a memory resort to return to, for venting our sadness in this world of mere perdition.
your visit is so greatly appreciated my friend.
Happiness and Peace.
5th Nov 2023 4:22pm
On the opposite side of things It did make me think of one I wrote called Paper Heart sinking... I understand what you mean by "But if we dont enjoy childhood, i assure you, we would be depressed, sad, we dont have a memory resort to return to, for venting our sadness in this world of mere perdition."
Its true Kristina, childhood, is an important station in our lives,
those who spent sad childhood,'' look at them '' do they live quiet a good life, do they behave normal, they are depressed and may be they even may fall in crimes and the like...Adult people with happy childhood are successful ones, they dont get sad or have suicidal thoughts..they are not addicted to any kind of drug or else,.....
Thank God i spent a very good childhood,enjoyed it tho the top of spontaneity, with some guys who still remember that time.....
Thanks very much for adding your thoughts, they are valuable.
Poetic Delight
those who spent sad childhood,'' look at them '' do they live quiet a good life, do they behave normal, they are depressed and may be they even may fall in crimes and the like...Adult people with happy childhood are successful ones, they dont get sad or have suicidal thoughts..they are not addicted to any kind of drug or else,.....
Thank God i spent a very good childhood,enjoyed it tho the top of spontaneity, with some guys who still remember that time.....
Thanks very much for adding your thoughts, they are valuable.
Poetic Delight
