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Do I Lie?
If you love me
then I cannot say
bad things
about
Myself
I said
to
myself
the
Other day
What I do
I do
for you:
All for you.
then I cannot say
bad things
about
Myself
I said
to
myself
the
Other day
What I do
I do
for you:
All for you.
Published 3rd Nov 2023
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Dear CO,
I am gobsmacked by the notion of that first stanza. What an awesome thought. And so very true. If we’re loved then we can’t be that bad. You have single handedly turned my thinking around and I thank you. Wonderful write. H🌷
I am gobsmacked by the notion of that first stanza. What an awesome thought. And so very true. If we’re loved then we can’t be that bad. You have single handedly turned my thinking around and I thank you. Wonderful write. H🌷
7th Nov 2023 8:24am
:)))
Thank you H...
It was such a wild thought
to meditate upon...
I have been thinking about
it for a while...
I feel very happy that the
notion impacted you in such a way...
I want to write books on cool subjects
that will effect people in such a way...
Thank you H...
It was such a wild thought
to meditate upon...
I have been thinking about
it for a while...
I feel very happy that the
notion impacted you in such a way...
I want to write books on cool subjects
that will effect people in such a way...
