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First submission

First Submission

I bet she can see me trembling as I keep my eyes aimed at the floor, I know I want to belong to her but I've never done this this thing before

I can feel her presence the moment she's in the room, it brings me a feeling of fulfilment and scares away any sort of fear and gloom

I feel her touch my head she lays her hands upon my hair, I feel a mixture of wild excitement mixed with a feeling of love and care

Her voice is soft and gentle as she gives me my daily tasks, I will do them all proudly, I'll do for her anything she asks

I will do my best to please her I want to be at her beck and call, to become her collared submissive I know I must give my Domme my all.

If she takes me to the bedroom I will do absolutely everything she needs, give her pleasure or take some pain, I will go wherever my lady leads

Once the experience is over, once we've both shared my first submissive time, with my Queens permission I will write of it in rhyme

Ron
Written by averageJoe69 (Ron Summers)
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Author's Note
There's a first time for everything
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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