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writing her picture
i wish
i could
write
her picture,
a thousand
eyes,
a thousand
smiles,
beauty,
more than
my pen,
more than
my mind
can sculpt,
more than
the world
can
piece together,
whatever they
understand
with
their best
ideas,
their best
intentions.
i could
write
her picture,
a thousand
eyes,
a thousand
smiles,
beauty,
more than
my pen,
more than
my mind
can sculpt,
more than
the world
can
piece together,
whatever they
understand
with
their best
ideas,
their best
intentions.
Published 1st Nov 2023
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1st Nov 2023 12:48pm
Sometimes no matter how hard we try to describe someone’s beauty through the love we feel for them, others will never see what we see. This is a lovely poem.
1st Nov 2023 4:38pm
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Anonymous
1st Nov 2023 9:15pm
Our inner eye will always see the beauty more powerfully than we can express. Beautiful
1st Nov 2023 9:21pm
1st Nov 2023 10:01pm
Beautiful! I love this part,
"beauty,
more than
my pen,
more than
my mind
can sculpt,"
"beauty,
more than
my pen,
more than
my mind
can sculpt,"
1st Nov 2023 10:16pm
