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autumn🍁
he was
flowing
in my
calm brush
of breeze...
after
constant
messages ...
he changed
his directon...
looks like
he found
someone else...
My Autumn
flowing
in my
calm brush
of breeze...
after
constant
messages ...
he changed
his directon...
looks like
he found
someone else...
My Autumn
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Re. autumn🍁
31st Oct 2023 5:40am
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31st Oct 2023 6:15am
It's my favorite too but when autumn comes in our life, we cannot bear it..। N it's truth.। Well thanks much...
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31st Oct 2023 5:45am
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Re: Re. autumn🍁
31st Oct 2023 6:18am
Thank you very much for your wishes.. he is really like the seasons..always keeps changing..and I always wait for the rain..well once again thank you ❤
Re. autumn🍁
31st Oct 2023 5:47am
Oh no! I'm sooo sorry. Leaves often have a habit of changing direction at the last second, just as you're about to catch them. Loving the metaphors here but appreciate & recognise the sadness & melancholy in your write also. 🙁
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Re: Re. autumn🍁
31st Oct 2023 6:13am
Thank you snaggy for understanding the depth of the lines and inspiring me to write..i am thankful...
Re. autumn🍁
31st Oct 2023 5:50am
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31st Oct 2023 6:20am
Re. autumn🍁
31st Oct 2023 11:30am
I'm an autumn baby
Scorpio
Supremely sexual
Often moody
Disappointment rising
Be your own best friend dimpy
Nirvana awaits those who go after what they want and need ....
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Scorpio
Supremely sexual
Often moody
Disappointment rising
Be your own best friend dimpy
Nirvana awaits those who go after what they want and need ....
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Re: Re. autumn🍁
31st Oct 2023 11:48am
You are right artist.. I always want to keep myself happy.. I don't want anyone to be the reason for my happiness... I never want to remember him but he is just not getting out of my system... Well thanks a lot for your positive words...
Re: Re. autumn🍁
31st Oct 2023 11:50am
I did my own poem after reading yours and borrowed from my comment to you..
You come first, then join hands with others ..
You come first, then join hands with others ..
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Re. autumn🍁
Anonymous
31st Oct 2023 1:36pm
The comparison to drifting leaves and attention is perfect here
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Re: Re. autumn🍁
31st Oct 2023 5:35pm
Re. autumn🍁
31st Oct 2023 4:52pm
Re. autumn🍁
Dear D,
To me interpreted this piece as the interested party went in an entirely different direction. It made me feel gutted having experienced this scenario embarrassingly often. In so far as the weather, autumn is really a beautiful season. Great write. H🌷
To me interpreted this piece as the interested party went in an entirely different direction. It made me feel gutted having experienced this scenario embarrassingly often. In so far as the weather, autumn is really a beautiful season. Great write. H🌷
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1st Nov 2023 6:15am
Re. autumn🍁
5th Nov 2023 7:21pm
Dimpy,
I am having a major dejavu right now. I could swear I read and commented on this poem a week ago, but I guess not. I had the distinct recollection of posting an old poem I had written about 40 years ago.
At the risk of repeating myself, the seasons spin with the Earth and all endings bring new life as we live through the cycles that pass. The song "All Things Must Pass" by George Harrison is about that. Here is the poem I wrote that I hope has a little bit of inspiration within it.
"Sleep"
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/27201-sleep---hiding-from-the-touch-of-death/
JJ
I am having a major dejavu right now. I could swear I read and commented on this poem a week ago, but I guess not. I had the distinct recollection of posting an old poem I had written about 40 years ago.
At the risk of repeating myself, the seasons spin with the Earth and all endings bring new life as we live through the cycles that pass. The song "All Things Must Pass" by George Harrison is about that. Here is the poem I wrote that I hope has a little bit of inspiration within it.
"Sleep"
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/27201-sleep---hiding-from-the-touch-of-death/
JJ
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