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Pump Me
Blood surging
Veins bulging
On the verge of bursting
Blood racing in vain
An out of control train
You're driving me insane
Renewing life feels so divine
So tiring this life of mine
And all born to share my line
For each red cell that I impart
Pumping my most passionate part
Yet I failed to love, now I am a broken heart
Veins bulging
On the verge of bursting
Blood racing in vain
An out of control train
You're driving me insane
Renewing life feels so divine
So tiring this life of mine
And all born to share my line
For each red cell that I impart
Pumping my most passionate part
Yet I failed to love, now I am a broken heart
Published 31st Oct 2023
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31st Oct 2023 1:51am
you're really on fire lately dearest JJ I'm glad to see such powerful feelings flowing through to ink 💕
31st Oct 2023 1:57am
Thank you Bren! I have been feeling most deeply in recent times. Pain has a way of awakening the heart and pumping up the esteem of my lonely muse...
JJ
JJ
Anonymous
31st Oct 2023 2:23am
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This one here JJ, actually had notes of happiness and lust. I liked the combo. Im my mind, lust always wins, lol. great write.
Love the pic, by the way. Its fitting. Its serene, yet dark yet full of love, yet not....<3
Love the pic, by the way. Its fitting. Its serene, yet dark yet full of love, yet not....<3
31st Oct 2023 3:50am
31st Oct 2023 4:02am
31st Oct 2023 5:40am
Dear PM,
I enjoyed the passion in this piece and its honesty of finding love within losing love and coping with heartbreak. A delicate subject beautifully rendered.
H🌷
I enjoyed the passion in this piece and its honesty of finding love within losing love and coping with heartbreak. A delicate subject beautifully rendered.
H🌷
31st Oct 2023 5:57am
4th Nov 2023 1:13am
Self reflective pieces always offer the beautiful and hurtful parts of the soul.
Awesome spill.
Awesome spill.
4th Nov 2023 1:38am
