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Transactional Lover
He was a transactional lover
giving to receive and
always wishing for more.
For a time we burned hot.
What a bright time it was!
giving to receive and
always wishing for more.
For a time we burned hot.
What a bright time it was!
Published 27th Oct 2023
Author's Note
My most recent lover was a flash in the pan but it was nice. Now it's over and I'm alone again. I edited the pic from one he took of me.
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27th Oct 2023 2:23pm
A warming read, for all the brevity of this "good while it lasted" relationship.
Reflecting on the second line, "it is in giving that we receive" (the words of Make Me A Channel of Your Piece come to mind here).
Reflecting on the second line, "it is in giving that we receive" (the words of Make Me A Channel of Your Piece come to mind here).
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- Edited 29th Dec 2023 8:45pm
27th Oct 2023 5:32pm
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