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Tenderly Submerged
The freedom of a righteous spirit is to move as the water flows
Wading in the thirst of its effervescent to submerge the heart, mind, and the energy of the soul
Naked worshipping in truth as the skin suppleness showered in the cloaked of its cleaning baptism
Within the essence of its beautiful hydration
Sacred steps your feet take to grant you the rites of your destination
Is there ever a miracle one must surrender unto when lives become mundane
The light of inspiration has somehow been dimmed
Dreams deferred in the present of a false illusion times of now will get better
The sweat of the brows becomes the daily mantras of a veiled purpose
Yet devoid of divinity, devoid of love, shadowing the emptiness of our inner Psalms
Where are you truly migrating when head of states seem to be navigating your existence
The temple bows down to unfretted salutations as it slave for wages just to maintain the presence in society
Consumerism nutrition we dine upon has been dipped in tainted poison
The lucrative assets of the world to economize our beliefs
In the name of Allah ruins battling ruins for the consecrated of land
Blood soaking in distance cries from the atrocities of human suffering
Sunrise as eyes have seen the coming of glory
Sunset in the inhale, exhale, internal rest in the restoration of self
Wading in the thirst of its effervescent to submerge the heart, mind, and the energy of the soul
Naked worshipping in truth as the skin suppleness showered in the cloaked of its cleaning baptism
Within the essence of its beautiful hydration
Sacred steps your feet take to grant you the rites of your destination
Is there ever a miracle one must surrender unto when lives become mundane
The light of inspiration has somehow been dimmed
Dreams deferred in the present of a false illusion times of now will get better
The sweat of the brows becomes the daily mantras of a veiled purpose
Yet devoid of divinity, devoid of love, shadowing the emptiness of our inner Psalms
Where are you truly migrating when head of states seem to be navigating your existence
The temple bows down to unfretted salutations as it slave for wages just to maintain the presence in society
Consumerism nutrition we dine upon has been dipped in tainted poison
The lucrative assets of the world to economize our beliefs
In the name of Allah ruins battling ruins for the consecrated of land
Blood soaking in distance cries from the atrocities of human suffering
Sunrise as eyes have seen the coming of glory
Sunset in the inhale, exhale, internal rest in the restoration of self
Published 22nd Oct 2023
Author's Note
The oaths of a woman I inscribe on water.
Sophocles
Sophocles
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22nd Oct 2023 11:38pm
What an insightful spill, my friend; more actual words you speak in this beautiful spilled upon thy canvas
25th Oct 2023 1:39am
Thank you for taking the time to read and the remarkable comment in tow, my friend.
In addition, I do hope your Tuesday was easy as you rest into the evening.
Enjoy your Tuesday evening and may a welcoming Wednesday greet your presence.
In addition, I do hope your Tuesday was easy as you rest into the evening.
Enjoy your Tuesday evening and may a welcoming Wednesday greet your presence.
25th Oct 2023 1:42am
25th Oct 2023 1:43am
The woman who enters the water is being accepted by God. Keep on writing my Queen.
25th Oct 2023 1:43am
Well listen to you, about time you read this response, may it find you in smiles and good hearted in nature.
Thank you tremendously for reading and the uplifting comment, my handsome poet.
May your Wednesday be abundant in giving and in receiving.
Thank you tremendously for reading and the uplifting comment, my handsome poet.
May your Wednesday be abundant in giving and in receiving.
25th Oct 2023 1:45am
25th Oct 2023 2:04am
23rd Oct 2023 5:21am
What we give as individuals
To benefit the filthy rich
And the crooked politicians
Make all our lives a bitch
We have no natural freedom
To satisfy our mortal soul
As each day passes by us
They put us deeper in the hole
To benefit the filthy rich
And the crooked politicians
Make all our lives a bitch
We have no natural freedom
To satisfy our mortal soul
As each day passes by us
They put us deeper in the hole
25th Oct 2023 1:56am
The state of the world has so many mishaps to continue to thrive, the primarily ruse lays within the varroas disparities in politics as well as religion.
I say that with the most humbling respect which stems for tainted food, two political parties, yet we cannot help the state of homelessness, not enough aid to feed its own society.
Yet, it saddens me the morality of its citizens to live that American dream is at an all time low, and no matter how many churches we go to feed out spiritual soul, we are coming up short in standing in the glory of our Creator's grace.
Thank for with the utter most sincerity for taking the time to read and the response to this incantation.
Have a fantastic evening and a wonderful Wednesday.
I say that with the most humbling respect which stems for tainted food, two political parties, yet we cannot help the state of homelessness, not enough aid to feed its own society.
Yet, it saddens me the morality of its citizens to live that American dream is at an all time low, and no matter how many churches we go to feed out spiritual soul, we are coming up short in standing in the glory of our Creator's grace.
Thank for with the utter most sincerity for taking the time to read and the response to this incantation.
Have a fantastic evening and a wonderful Wednesday.
23rd Oct 2023 1:53pm
25th Oct 2023 2:02am
A comment, I can agree with, my wandering poet, yes, I love the water and the properties for which it stands and that is to cleanse the core of the soul.
It is always a treat when you inscribe upon my canvas such meaningful words and thank you.
In as much, enjoy your Tuesday as I am bidding you a rewarding Wednesday.
It is always a treat when you inscribe upon my canvas such meaningful words and thank you.
In as much, enjoy your Tuesday as I am bidding you a rewarding Wednesday.
26th Oct 2023 3:02am
Wonderfully done. You make it seem so easy, to write with such discreet enthusiasm. It's there all right, you just do it most welcoming.
You write mini epics of motivation.
So strong.
You write mini epics of motivation.
So strong.
