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The Diamond
I need to pause, to look
at this diamond of a moment;
then, I will step inside
the warm core beneath
its tough skin.
There, light doesn't blind
but soothe the dulled eye,
the breathless mind
caught in a broken dance.
That's when I'll become free;
the diamond itself.
at this diamond of a moment;
then, I will step inside
the warm core beneath
its tough skin.
There, light doesn't blind
but soothe the dulled eye,
the breathless mind
caught in a broken dance.
That's when I'll become free;
the diamond itself.
Published 18th Oct 2023
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A (hopefully) meditative poem.
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18th Oct 2023 5:26pm
Very concise and expressive, in a unique emotional transition and interpretation. I really like the form you use, and how you worked through the stanzas. Thanks for sharing!
18th Oct 2023 7:13pm
