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WHAT ELSE DO I NEED TO DO?
I have hinted,
implied, been coy,
beat-around-the bush,
suggested, come
close to spelling
it out for you.
YET,
you still refuse,
reject, and seem
to be reluctant to
do what you desire
to do too.
We both acknowledge
the hints of yes
desires to share from
nose to toes and
every place the passion
dares to GO.
PLEASE!
What else do I need to
do? YES, I'm sure
I'm ready to do
whatever it is.
implied, been coy,
beat-around-the bush,
suggested, come
close to spelling
it out for you.
YET,
you still refuse,
reject, and seem
to be reluctant to
do what you desire
to do too.
We both acknowledge
the hints of yes
desires to share from
nose to toes and
every place the passion
dares to GO.
PLEASE!
What else do I need to
do? YES, I'm sure
I'm ready to do
whatever it is.
Published 14th Oct 2023
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14th Oct 2023 8:19pm
Sometimes, your words take me where i did never think to be
But, eventually i always find some fun in what you say
You have get two birds with one stone, very little stone.
Thanks for the smile.my friend
But, eventually i always find some fun in what you say
You have get two birds with one stone, very little stone.
Thanks for the smile.my friend
14th Oct 2023 9:05pm
14th Oct 2023 9:14pm
Dude, we find that being straight up is the best way forward. You may have to take her out to lunch or dinner and express your true desires, but don't pussyfoot with it. Even in reject there is clarity and you can but move on or remain friends but clear the air. Tight write dude
14th Oct 2023 9:47pm
15th Oct 2023 11:36pm
I agree with I_IS _ME, just be direct. Tell them your feelings and intentions and take it from there. Honesty is always the best policy.
16th Oct 2023 1:41pm
