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The Last Donut
One donut is in the box,
that is all that there is left.
A group of people in the house,
what will they do next?
Will one person try to eat it,
or share it with the others?
The donut has disappeared,
and the dog is gone, they have discovered.
that is all that there is left.
A group of people in the house,
what will they do next?
Will one person try to eat it,
or share it with the others?
The donut has disappeared,
and the dog is gone, they have discovered.
Author's Note
There's one donut in the box sitting in front of me.
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Re. The Last Donut
12th Oct 2023 7:24pm
They must be devoured immediately!
And the word...immediATEly has the word ATE trying to hide in inside of it.
And the word...immediATEly has the word ATE trying to hide in inside of it.
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Re: Re. The Last Donut
12th Oct 2023 8:26pm
Ha, I would usually agree with that, but the filling in these donuts was like eating a mouthful of sugar. Just too sweet too me.
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