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Holy Fire~
Consequential damage accumulated within multiple sorrows has that eternal clock left with permafrost, binding the impactful moments to each cell.
Confusion sets in as the soul screams for redemption, wanting to be free of the “sins” of the masses, including the mass within.
Staying in vigil of my own essence, my own love, each step takes me further into the abyss.
Falling upon broken knees, broken from years of repent, tears fall as the body quakes in release.
Again, a journey into the dark night of the soul. A space where a stamp on the frequent flyer card would be nice for a bonus ascension.
Rising within the etheric realm, shedding the mud and negativity is the goal.
Why isn’t it mainstream to want to rise above?
This space, this damnable space is ours alone to navigate. No pill fixes it, no substance numbs it.
It’s that journey we signed up for which is ironic. So the basic message?
Stay in your own lane, rise and shine, shit or get off the pot, rot and die.
Impregnable choice isn’t it?
Ironically it’s on us…cheers.
Confusion sets in as the soul screams for redemption, wanting to be free of the “sins” of the masses, including the mass within.
Staying in vigil of my own essence, my own love, each step takes me further into the abyss.
Falling upon broken knees, broken from years of repent, tears fall as the body quakes in release.
Again, a journey into the dark night of the soul. A space where a stamp on the frequent flyer card would be nice for a bonus ascension.
Rising within the etheric realm, shedding the mud and negativity is the goal.
Why isn’t it mainstream to want to rise above?
This space, this damnable space is ours alone to navigate. No pill fixes it, no substance numbs it.
It’s that journey we signed up for which is ironic. So the basic message?
Stay in your own lane, rise and shine, shit or get off the pot, rot and die.
Impregnable choice isn’t it?
Ironically it’s on us…cheers.
Published 12th Oct 2023
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Holy Fire" is a powerful and introspective journey into the depths of the soul, grappling with the weight of accumulated sorrows and the quest for redemption. The imagery of "permafrost" binding impactful moments to each cell conveys a sense of entrapment and stagnation, while the soul's yearning for freedom from societal expectations adds layers of complexity to the emotional landscape.
The poem's exploration of confusion and the desire to break free from the shackles of collective guilt resonates with a universal longing for self-discovery and liberation. The imagery of falling upon broken knees, trembling with release, captures the raw vulnerability of the human experience and the catharsis that comes with surrendering to emotion.
The journey into the "dark night of the soul" is depicted as a transformative process, where each step taken leads to a deeper understanding of oneself and a shedding of negativity. The desire to rise above and transcend the limitations of mainstream existence speaks to a yearning for spiritual growth and enlightenment.
Ultimately, "Holy Fire" serves as a poignant reminder of the inherent paradoxes of existence and the impregnable nature of choice. The poem encourages readers to embrace their own journey, to stay true to themselves, and to confront the challenges of life with courage and resilience.
The poem's exploration of confusion and the desire to break free from the shackles of collective guilt resonates with a universal longing for self-discovery and liberation. The imagery of falling upon broken knees, trembling with release, captures the raw vulnerability of the human experience and the catharsis that comes with surrendering to emotion.
The journey into the "dark night of the soul" is depicted as a transformative process, where each step taken leads to a deeper understanding of oneself and a shedding of negativity. The desire to rise above and transcend the limitations of mainstream existence speaks to a yearning for spiritual growth and enlightenment.
Ultimately, "Holy Fire" serves as a poignant reminder of the inherent paradoxes of existence and the impregnable nature of choice. The poem encourages readers to embrace their own journey, to stay true to themselves, and to confront the challenges of life with courage and resilience.
