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Dream Lights
It’s dark out tonight
The stars are closed
But I’ve got dream lights
Illuminating me
It’s how I was made
Pep in my step
Walking in tune on
Sidewalks or blacktops
To the sound of
My soul’s whistle
Following the instincts
Of my mind’s missile
Navigating myself
Towards the ceiling of my
Brain’s right hemisphere
Moving the bulbs around
Careful not to shatter
My tunnel vision
Filled with dream lights
Never nervous when they
Try to flicker
Because I’ll remember
To steady the light
Reach for the dream
The stars are closed
But I’ve got dream lights
Illuminating me
It’s how I was made
Pep in my step
Walking in tune on
Sidewalks or blacktops
To the sound of
My soul’s whistle
Following the instincts
Of my mind’s missile
Navigating myself
Towards the ceiling of my
Brain’s right hemisphere
Moving the bulbs around
Careful not to shatter
My tunnel vision
Filled with dream lights
Never nervous when they
Try to flicker
Because I’ll remember
To steady the light
Reach for the dream
Published 8th Oct 2023
Author's Note
Wanted to write something uplifting.
Keeping the drive alive in a way:)
Hope you enjoy!
Keeping the drive alive in a way:)
Hope you enjoy!
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8th Oct 2023 00:07am
8th Oct 2023 00:17am
8th Oct 2023 2:38am
11th Oct 2023 1:25am
Hey Cisco!
I reach for it all the time. Never mind that I'm short. LOL
Thanks for stopping by!
I reach for it all the time. Never mind that I'm short. LOL
Thanks for stopping by!
8th Oct 2023 4:32am
11th Oct 2023 1:28am
8th Oct 2023 3:00pm
This was perfect for my mood this morning! Buoyancy in every line and internal light spilling all through each stanza. Love it! 😊
11th Oct 2023 1:30am
Hi Willow:)
I was in a buoyancy mood. LOL
I woke up and wanted to write something peppy and
upbeat. I've got a lot to be thankful for. Especially with all
the craziness in the world right now.
Thanks or catching the vibe on this!
And for the RL
Woop Woop!
I was in a buoyancy mood. LOL
I woke up and wanted to write something peppy and
upbeat. I've got a lot to be thankful for. Especially with all
the craziness in the world right now.
Thanks or catching the vibe on this!
And for the RL
Woop Woop!
11th Oct 2023 2:04am
I like how this captures your positive vibes that you seem to have an abundance of 99 percent of the time. You transferred that energy into your write here for sure. You have such an inspiring personality and when it shines onto your writes, it's illuminating.
You're the brightest light ya know. Maybe I'm a bit partial...
Wednesday huh. Going for student of the month?! Lol
You're the brightest light ya know. Maybe I'm a bit partial...
Wednesday huh. Going for student of the month?! Lol
11th Oct 2023 2:18am
Hey baby:)
I'm in a positive place right now.
I wanted it have attitude and confidence.
Goals can be shaken at times. That's why it's important to
have positive people around you. It matters!
Yes - Wednesday!! She's a total badass.
Maybe I'm going for celloist of the month! LOL
Thanks for the read and the RL big sexy!!
Pssst! Btw t's totally okay to be partial to me. hehehe
I'm in a positive place right now.
I wanted it have attitude and confidence.
Goals can be shaken at times. That's why it's important to
have positive people around you. It matters!
Yes - Wednesday!! She's a total badass.
Maybe I'm going for celloist of the month! LOL
Thanks for the read and the RL big sexy!!
Pssst! Btw t's totally okay to be partial to me. hehehe
11th Oct 2023 2:39am
OMG, let's get a cello! Can I pick your outfit?! I love the deep, rich notes that a cello produces. It's like pumping blood through its strings.
Invigorating!
Invigorating!
11th Oct 2023 2:49am
Ha! I'm ahead of you.
My boss married a celloist. I can get one stat!
And if I'm horrible you have to smile through the whole number.
Cause you're partial and all:) hahaha
My boss married a celloist. I can get one stat!
And if I'm horrible you have to smile through the whole number.
Cause you're partial and all:) hahaha
15th Oct 2023 00:24am
You'll love this little story, Adelphina. Dream lights once helped me find my way back to my hotel, drunk, in Torquay, Devon, once upon a time back in April 2016. These lights lit the way along the curve of the bay, you see, until the council turned them off at midnight, lol. I spent 4 days there & even have a poem written about it. :-)
15th Oct 2023 9:28pm
Hey Billy!
That's pretty awesome. haha
What were you drinking???
I think it's so important to be able to keep your motivation going.
Especially when the path is not lit. To have that internal dream light guiding you towards your destiny. Dreams are a powerful tool that only you can feel cause they are yours!
Thanks for sharing your story!
That's pretty awesome. haha
What were you drinking???
I think it's so important to be able to keep your motivation going.
Especially when the path is not lit. To have that internal dream light guiding you towards your destiny. Dreams are a powerful tool that only you can feel cause they are yours!
Thanks for sharing your story!
15th Oct 2023 11:40pm
Very good, Adelphina.
My favorite verses: "... Towards the ceiling of my Brain’s right hemisphere... "
My favorite verses: "... Towards the ceiling of my Brain’s right hemisphere... "
15th Oct 2023 11:47pm
Hey there!!
Thank you! I wanted to write something with some
swag to it. hahaha
Thanks for stopping by amigo!!
Thank you! I wanted to write something with some
swag to it. hahaha
Thanks for stopping by amigo!!
17th Oct 2023 3:17pm
25th Oct 2023 6:50am
Dear A,
Wonderful piece. The closing stanza is like a kiss of encouragement to go for it, whatever your “it” is. I enjoyed the positivity in this greatly. H🌷
Wonderful piece. The closing stanza is like a kiss of encouragement to go for it, whatever your “it” is. I enjoyed the positivity in this greatly. H🌷
27th Oct 2023 00:37am
Hi H!!
What a wonderful reply. Thank you:)
I feel at times when we feel down we need to be our own cheerleaders.
When things get tough it's hard to stay focused. Life can throw you curve balls and I'm not a fan of baseball!! I'm way to impatient for that. LOL
Glad you enjoyed and thanks for the RL:)
I know they are harder to come by these days!
What a wonderful reply. Thank you:)
I feel at times when we feel down we need to be our own cheerleaders.
When things get tough it's hard to stay focused. Life can throw you curve balls and I'm not a fan of baseball!! I'm way to impatient for that. LOL
Glad you enjoyed and thanks for the RL:)
I know they are harder to come by these days!
27th Oct 2023 3:15am
Omg! Baseball! Two minutes of excitement crammed into four endless hours of game time. 🙄 the worst. 😊
xx
xx
31st Oct 2023 2:17am
Great positive attitude young lady. The dark is only one spectrum, there are others that allow you to see (infrared for example).
31st Oct 2023 2:29am
Hey DaVinci
So true.
Always have to find a way when there isn't one.
Thanks for stopping by for a read!
So true.
Always have to find a way when there isn't one.
Thanks for stopping by for a read!
