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Neon Memories Fading
...listening to the silence of dementia
and neon memories fading away
losing their lunch money
to a lonelier tomorrow
synchronizing the pendulum
in a shroud of darkness
watching shadows of the moonwalk
like a needle on a record skipping
in old photographs, marking time
listening to the silence of dementia
and neon memories fading away
and neon memories fading away
losing their lunch money
to a lonelier tomorrow
synchronizing the pendulum
in a shroud of darkness
watching shadows of the moonwalk
like a needle on a record skipping
in old photographs, marking time
listening to the silence of dementia
and neon memories fading away
Published 3rd Oct 2023
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3rd Oct 2023 10:17pm
Dementia is the loudest thing ever. At least with my mom.
Non stop vocal mania
Non stop vocal mania
3rd Oct 2023 10:22pm
This was taken from a dark story that I wrote some time ago. Everything thing that I write is 98% imagination. My life is not an open book.
Well I hope you understand why I reacted like that.
And it's not a bad thing to share something about your life. The support I get helps me. There is PLENTY I tell no one.
And it's not a bad thing to share something about your life. The support I get helps me. There is PLENTY I tell no one.
4th Oct 2023 00:14am
4th Oct 2023 1:12am
4th Oct 2023 4:38am
Dear A,
I think the melancholy in this piece is relatable whether it’s fiction or not. That’s a mark of great writing. You have touched your readers hearts. H🌷
I think the melancholy in this piece is relatable whether it’s fiction or not. That’s a mark of great writing. You have touched your readers hearts. H🌷
4th Oct 2023 12:21pm
