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Aphrodite by the Ocean
I'm afloat upon your ocean
stimulated by your motion
mind and body synchronizing
resonating in surprising
overpowering sex appealing
mind to mind and too with feeling
sweet sensations through my fingers
coming close where something lingers...
Aphrodite I"m in awe
of your power over raw
pulsing feelings you've ignited
upside down now I've been righted...
Aphrodite by the ocean
senses tingle with your motion
you breathe sensuality
arousing something inside me
which was sleeping before knowing
just your presence starts it flowing
like a river streaming, seeming
to be what I feel when I'm dreaming
that you're with me by the seashore
on the edge desiring much more
together in shared reverie
Aphrodite loving and me ...
stimulated by your motion
mind and body synchronizing
resonating in surprising
overpowering sex appealing
mind to mind and too with feeling
sweet sensations through my fingers
coming close where something lingers...
Aphrodite I"m in awe
of your power over raw
pulsing feelings you've ignited
upside down now I've been righted...
Aphrodite by the ocean
senses tingle with your motion
you breathe sensuality
arousing something inside me
which was sleeping before knowing
just your presence starts it flowing
like a river streaming, seeming
to be what I feel when I'm dreaming
that you're with me by the seashore
on the edge desiring much more
together in shared reverie
Aphrodite loving and me ...
Published 3rd Oct 2023
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3rd Oct 2023 6:07am
Arousing read. Favourite verses:
Aphrodite I"m in awe
of your power over raw
pulsing feelings you've ignited
upside down now I've been righted...
which was sleeping before knowing
just your presence starts it flowing
like a river streaming, seeming
to be what I feel when I'm dreaming [this verse reads like a recount of a wet dream]
Aphrodite I"m in awe
of your power over raw
pulsing feelings you've ignited
upside down now I've been righted...
which was sleeping before knowing
just your presence starts it flowing
like a river streaming, seeming
to be what I feel when I'm dreaming [this verse reads like a recount of a wet dream]
3rd Oct 2023 5:08pm
3rd Oct 2023 11:02am
You write the most consistently beautiful poetry.
Always such a lovely read.
Always such a lovely read.
3rd Oct 2023 5:13pm
I am happy you enjoyed this...I like to write poetry that I enjoy to read out loud (that's how I find out what works)...every happiness Lawrence
