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...most people think that
poets are phony
...maybe quirky..a tad bit unhinged
..but never phony
when we decide to un-beautify our words
...and give them the laymen
they thought they always wanted
from us...
....and once we give them that work
and once they feel
...the kind of hurt that burns
to the core,...the things we've always
see in 3-D
......they learn...
oh hell yeah they learn...
....suddenly how to turn that {k}new leaf
and leave us the fuck alone
...so let's keep it family friendly with
barbeque and spades
........cuz most folk don't really wanna
play Spades with a Poet
poets are phony
...maybe quirky..a tad bit unhinged
..but never phony
when we decide to un-beautify our words
...and give them the laymen
they thought they always wanted
from us...
....and once we give them that work
and once they feel
...the kind of hurt that burns
to the core,...the things we've always
see in 3-D
......they learn...
oh hell yeah they learn...
....suddenly how to turn that {k}new leaf
and leave us the fuck alone
...so let's keep it family friendly with
barbeque and spades
........cuz most folk don't really wanna
play Spades with a Poet
Published 29th Sep 2023
| Edited 30th Sep 2023
Author's Note
I'm a nature geek
and I've always looked at porcupines
as the poets of wildlife
because some truths are hard to swallow
and I've always looked at porcupines
as the poets of wildlife
because some truths are hard to swallow
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That was so cool and so true!
Don't mess with a wise poet. 🦉 😊
I cherish the gift that I can give words to what burns in my core.
I just read your author's note, I love love that.
Don't mess with a wise poet. 🦉 😊
I cherish the gift that I can give words to what burns in my core.
I just read your author's note, I love love that.
29th Sep 2023 4:15pm
i've always preferred Bid-Wiz to spades, but OK, yeah
the Porcupine is the perfect animal to be a poet's animal totem.
Loved the energy You infused here
the Porcupine is the perfect animal to be a poet's animal totem.
Loved the energy You infused here
29th Sep 2023 9:38pm
30th Sep 2023 00:56am
Thanks for sharing this with style and grace yet like a razor blade cutting through the depth of the steel and stone,🔥🔥🔥🔥♀️📿♀️
30th Sep 2023 3:06am
Poets put words to the things people pretend not to feel... sometimes it's ugly, and prickly. Porcupine is a perfect poet!
Cool idea, great write.
❤️k
Cool idea, great write.
❤️k
4th Oct 2023 1:38am
Dude! I was a spades pro while in the army. And my brother got good from his years in prison, so when we partnered up years later, we killed it. Good times.
Your write, awesome and accurate. Very few people in my real life know about my writing. I've almost always kept it separate. Maybe the vulnerability aspect I was afraid of.
Your words ring true. Great write Naajir.
Your write, awesome and accurate. Very few people in my real life know about my writing. I've almost always kept it separate. Maybe the vulnerability aspect I was afraid of.
Your words ring true. Great write Naajir.
