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incredible rain: a pentaprismic suite
of floods and famines, flaws and fools
4. flaws
indelible stain
marks well the parchment of the careless ink
that scribbles disdain
to push humility out on the brink
high horses will trip
when challenged by a slippery-slopey path
saved not by the whip
of him who navigates with fuming wrath
© Copyright 2023 September 18
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
4. flaws
indelible stain
marks well the parchment of the careless ink
that scribbles disdain
to push humility out on the brink
high horses will trip
when challenged by a slippery-slopey path
saved not by the whip
of him who navigates with fuming wrath
© Copyright 2023 September 18
by Clyve A. Bowen♫
Published 24th Sep 2023
Author's Note
Pentaprism: a prism that has five faces, a pair of which are at 90° to each other
Suite: a number of things forming a series or set
This pentaprismic suite comprises 5 shorter poems proliferating around the main theme. It has an opening overture (prelude) and four concordant episodes. Ultimately, it is a single poem in five episodes. This is episode 3.
Suite: a number of things forming a series or set
This pentaprismic suite comprises 5 shorter poems proliferating around the main theme. It has an opening overture (prelude) and four concordant episodes. Ultimately, it is a single poem in five episodes. This is episode 3.
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26th Sep 2023 00:41am
26th Sep 2023 7:09am
I am deeply grateful for your interest and encouragement, Ahavati. I was, indeed, exploring an idea with this series, and I believe it has paid off even better than anticipated. Thanks for the R/L. It says a lot to me.
Yours sincerely
cab
Yours sincerely
cab
