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LOVELY IN BLACK
You look lovely in black:
I feel that near the sack
that I could keenly hit
if we want to Do It.
I feel that near the sack
that I could keenly hit
if we want to Do It.
Published 22nd Sep 2023
Author's Note
An articulation of how a Little Black Dress can put the L, B and D into "Libido" for a desiring admirer's mind.
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22nd Sep 2023 6:37am
Raise up your dress of black
Show me your moistened crack
That I would love to hit
I’m quite sure my cock would fit
I hope you don’t mind this second stanza that the first inspired…
Show me your moistened crack
That I would love to hit
I’m quite sure my cock would fit
I hope you don’t mind this second stanza that the first inspired…
22nd Sep 2023 6:51am
That would make a good sequel.
Funny coincidence, I had just finished reading and commenting of Poetic Quill's "Soggy Kitten", a few poems in this Erotic section before mine. Wonder if you had been reading it, too?
Funny coincidence, I had just finished reading and commenting of Poetic Quill's "Soggy Kitten", a few poems in this Erotic section before mine. Wonder if you had been reading it, too?
22nd Sep 2023 6:53am
22nd Sep 2023 3:04pm
Oh, my wise poet.. if I continue to speak, my words will become your softest crime entwined in my tender passion.
This is so.. spicy in the brevity and very well deserving of my poetic signature whispers.
This is so.. spicy in the brevity and very well deserving of my poetic signature whispers.
