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Will I ever be able to see you again?
Like the fragrance of a flower
I miss you every minute every hour
Oh baby where have you gone
Without you it feels like my heart's completely torned
I still remember walking hand in hand with you
Your smile as fresh in my memory as a morning dew
Oh baby where have you gone
Without you how can I ever be strong
You're like the pillar that holds me
Without you there is nothing beautiful to see
Oh baby where have you gone
It's been so long
I cry everyday hoping
I would find you someday
Without you there is a void that can never be filled
Without you it feels like my inner spirit has been killed
Will I ever be able to see you again?
Will I ever get over this pain?
I miss you every minute every hour
Oh baby where have you gone
Without you it feels like my heart's completely torned
I still remember walking hand in hand with you
Your smile as fresh in my memory as a morning dew
Oh baby where have you gone
Without you how can I ever be strong
You're like the pillar that holds me
Without you there is nothing beautiful to see
Oh baby where have you gone
It's been so long
I cry everyday hoping
I would find you someday
Without you there is a void that can never be filled
Without you it feels like my inner spirit has been killed
Will I ever be able to see you again?
Will I ever get over this pain?
Published 19th Sep 2023
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- Edited 29th Dec 2023 8:45pm
19th Sep 2023 7:30pm
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19th Sep 2023 9:49pm
23rd Nov 2023 5:28am
Hey this is great, do you have any poems which don't use a simple rhyme scheme? If not, I'd recommend trying done. It limits you, but for me that limit usually makes better texts.
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