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Breathe Slow Dear
Sit silently, my dear
Just breathe
There are no worries here
Let your mind slow
Just take this moment too...
Sit silently, my dear
This is your safe space
To relax and express
There are no worries here
Watch this energy
Take a hold, as you...
Sit silently, my dear
To enjoy for a while
This soothing energy
There are no worries here
Calming the child deeply
Oh, so deep within
Sit silently, my dear
There are no worries here...
Just breathe
There are no worries here
Let your mind slow
Just take this moment too...
Sit silently, my dear
This is your safe space
To relax and express
There are no worries here
Watch this energy
Take a hold, as you...
Sit silently, my dear
To enjoy for a while
This soothing energy
There are no worries here
Calming the child deeply
Oh, so deep within
Sit silently, my dear
There are no worries here...
Published 13th Sep 2023
Author's Note
As I evolve as a poet, I am trying my hand at new forms of writing and discovery. Here is my very first practice "Villanelle" poem, thought I'd share it with you all!
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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13th Sep 2023 12:16pm
I like this! I’ll have to look up this style of poetry, I am unaware. I admire your willingness to learn. You picked up haikus effortlessly.
Wonderful work, dear poetess.
Wonderful work, dear poetess.
13th Sep 2023 1:07pm
Ahhhhh, that's so sweet! I am so greatful that you enjoyed this piece and am thankful for your kind and meaningful words, they truly do mean a lot, thank you!💛
