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Mood Swings
It is though a dark curtain
has been drawn across my mind
filtering out the will to live
This heavy fog seems to soak
through my bones
like an unwanted guest
has been drawn across my mind
filtering out the will to live
This heavy fog seems to soak
through my bones
like an unwanted guest
Published 10th Sep 2023
Author's Note
I don't know why I feel so low?
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10th Sep 2023 10:55pm
I understand those mood swings I get them really bad too... this is really well written 💕
11th Sep 2023 8:54am
Thanks crimsin. It's just something I have to accept, but it can get pretty dark sometimes
11th Sep 2023 1:59am
Me and these mood swings are no strangers. Listen to your fave songs, it always helps me. Hope you are ok and will be ok. Always wake up <3
11th Sep 2023 8:57am
Thanks for your comments. I know a lot of people experience mood swings. The fog lifts after a while. I just have to be patient.
11th Sep 2023 9:17am
Dear E,
Very relatable write. I especially like the title blended with this piece as moods do tend to swing given enough time. Although, if I’m being honest, sometimes waiting it out seems like forever. There’s not a wasted word in this poem that doesn’t touch the soul of your reader. H🌷
Very relatable write. I especially like the title blended with this piece as moods do tend to swing given enough time. Although, if I’m being honest, sometimes waiting it out seems like forever. There’s not a wasted word in this poem that doesn’t touch the soul of your reader. H🌷
11th Sep 2023 1:04pm
Thanks so much for your comments. Moods can be like the weather. I've never felt balanced, but I do my best to disguise it.
