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One Life Given
This is my one life
A gift from my mother’s love
Death will soon follow
A gift from my mother’s love
Death will soon follow
Published 9th Sep 2023
| Edited 10th Sep 2023
Author's Note
Dark thoughts about the brevity of life. The photos are ones mother took of me and friends. I wanted to reflect how we each end alone.
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9th Sep 2023 3:04pm
Anonymous
- Edited 29th Dec 2023 8:45pm
9th Sep 2023 3:27pm
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A haiku that puts life in a nutshell, although I wish the third line is not fulfilled too soon for you in the future..
9th Sep 2023 10:32pm
10th Sep 2023 1:53am
You must carry on, Lauryn. To quit is simply not good enough! If you quit, Billy will be forever on your back! And you wouldn't like that, believe me!
