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Twisted nursery rhyme
Rock a bye crazy,
From the tree top .
When the wind blows,
Will the pain finally stop ?
When the heart breaks,
And in love you will fall....
Down you'll fall crazy,
Love , life , pain and all ??
From the tree top .
When the wind blows,
Will the pain finally stop ?
When the heart breaks,
And in love you will fall....
Down you'll fall crazy,
Love , life , pain and all ??
Published 9th Sep 2023
Author's Note
Just another knock off nursery rhyme.
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9th Sep 2023 2:24pm
9th Sep 2023 10:31pm
You fall in and out of love. It's better to have love than not love at all. Keep on writing.
10th Sep 2023 3:22am
6th Oct 2023 6:34am
A rhyme that asks in its way the question if love is worth looking for if you want to avoid the pains and stresses relationships sometimes bring.
