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The Hues of Woo
Colorful are the days
When you're falling in love,
You realize beauty
Exists in every
Pore and hair follicle,
Brown, red, blonde or graying.
Rainbows without end
Bless golden sun rays,
Illuminate each
Mornings jade and gold
Arisen in eyes.
Holding hands pinks
Your splendid smooth cheeks
In yon garden
Where roses bloom.
Comets blaze
Inside eyes
Trailing stars
Glitter,
Moonlit
Hearts.
When you're falling in love,
You realize beauty
Exists in every
Pore and hair follicle,
Brown, red, blonde or graying.
Rainbows without end
Bless golden sun rays,
Illuminate each
Mornings jade and gold
Arisen in eyes.
Holding hands pinks
Your splendid smooth cheeks
In yon garden
Where roses bloom.
Comets blaze
Inside eyes
Trailing stars
Glitter,
Moonlit
Hearts.
Published 8th Sep 2023
| Edited 11th Sep 2023
Author's Note
Diminished Hexaverse form, poem. Written the original way it should be written. Not starting with 5 syllables and lines, but 6, removing one syllable and line per stanza without rhymes.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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8th Sep 2023 3:36pm
The artwork and words are so perfectly matched. Thanks for sharing your amazing talent. Have a wonderful and WRITE day. Hugs and peace, Oral
8th Sep 2023 3:39pm
Thank you, thank you! It's always a good day to WRITE. Love the pun. ox Kathy
