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Moon among the stars

Sky once glisten,
Night brings life uneven.
Lost in the limelight,
In battle of hearts we try to fight.  
 
Engagements never once won,
In a life that was never blessed with vision.
To be treated right was the dream,
Even among gentlemen esteemed.  
 
Soul set ablaze,
By star lost in haze.
Passion filled by planets,
Empty heart burried in a casket.
 
Unquenchable thirst greeted by rocks,
Path to true pleasure is block.
Mend and bend with the earth,
Wandered soul stomped like dirt.
 
Trees then blossomed,
Spring came, ice thawed and tamed
Again got lost in a haze
Since life is such a maze.
 
My my what reckon
Horizon stirred and clears
Once you fall in love with the moon
All the stars disappear
Written by eljustignoreyou (John Daliva)
Published | Edited 11th Sep 2023
Author's Note
This poem is inspired of how I came to meet the love of my life, my other half, my soon-to-be-wife. Ish I love you with all that I am :)
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