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An Aching Cocoon
Climax was like speeding through a euphoric galaxy.
Completely unburdened by mundane reality.
My mind dreams deep, but far from sleep.
Desire drenched lips bring my naked petals a dew of bliss.
Abandoning myself to you is a sweet intense insanity.
As you stare at the center of my soul
Devouring my untold.
In an aching cocoon in the garden of my heart.
The caterpillar of never, becomes butterflies of the deepest pleasure.
Completely unburdened by mundane reality.
My mind dreams deep, but far from sleep.
Desire drenched lips bring my naked petals a dew of bliss.
Abandoning myself to you is a sweet intense insanity.
As you stare at the center of my soul
Devouring my untold.
In an aching cocoon in the garden of my heart.
The caterpillar of never, becomes butterflies of the deepest pleasure.
Written by
deliabear
(Debbie)
Published 3rd Sep 2023
| Edited 16th Mar 2024
Author's Note
Waiting for my chrysalis.
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Re. An Aching Cocoon
3rd Sep 2023 4:16pm
This is the experience brought to life in your poetry, it fully portrays the whole rollercoaster ride of the moment. Great piece
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3rd Sep 2023 6:13pm
good morning beautiful Debbie this is incredibly sexy
such beautiful metaphors 💕
such beautiful metaphors 💕
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3rd Sep 2023 9:00pm
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4th Sep 2023 00:14am
I got myself at that too, lol.
That is so nice of you to say. I'm kinda just dipping my foot in the erotic pool.
You are one of the masters.
That is so nice of you to say. I'm kinda just dipping my foot in the erotic pool.
You are one of the masters.
Re. An Aching Cocoon
4th Sep 2023 8:41am
I'm a junkie for metaphysical musings when done like this...
Like spark plugs to an engine
this vibe ignites...
Like spark plugs to an engine
this vibe ignites...
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4th Sep 2023 10:00am
That is so nice of you to say.
I take that as a huge compliment & I so appreciate you reading it.
I take that as a huge compliment & I so appreciate you reading it.
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