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teeter without totter...or is it the other way around
He digs my darkness
says it enhances His own
our demons not only compatible
but complimentary
the way fire needs oxygen
to maintain the flame
and for combustion
but He recently asked
when writing of us
it's all softness & passion
but when you speak of yourself
it comes out dark
painful & harsh
why is that
forcing myself to meet His gaze
I never hide my eyes from Him
we have that agreement
He can't understand my feelings
if He can't see them
my reply came quietly
the softest of whispers
it's not the same
when I write of you
I write with love
and He frowned down at me
His face a mask of unbearable sadness
but that's madness
how can you shower me with so much compassion
speak with such incredible devotion
filling your expression with amazing emotion
regarding us as a pairing
but not give yourself equal caring
don't you see
you're part of the equation
baby, this pattern isn't balanced
we gotta level the field
and change how you view
you
Published 2nd Sep 2023
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2nd Sep 2023 5:42pm
that's really beautiful lovely Willow sounds like a keeper to me
someone who cares for you so tenderly 💕
someone who cares for you so tenderly 💕
3rd Sep 2023 2:15am
He's definitely a keeper! Super grateful He feels the same about me. Thank you so much for the love on this one, Brenda 😊
3rd Sep 2023 4:47am
Dear W,
I so enjoyed this poem. To be so loved and cared for between two people is such a gift. It’s lovely to read of such love and gratitude. Beautiful write. H🌷
I so enjoyed this poem. To be so loved and cared for between two people is such a gift. It’s lovely to read of such love and gratitude. Beautiful write. H🌷
3rd Sep 2023 1:51pm
Thank you, Honoring, for feeling this one. I am constantly amazed at Us and where we've come. The journey is a beautiful thing 😊
4th Sep 2023 9:02am
A balancing act of sorts..
He's addressing you at the holistic level
A true measure of love indeed
Much respect
Naaj
He's addressing you at the holistic level
A true measure of love indeed
Much respect
Naaj
4th Sep 2023 2:39pm
If we could only see through the eyes of those who love us. How different our world would look...Thank you, Naaj 😊
