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Where Does My Story End?
Where does my story end? Will it be
in a frenzied dance of lust or in the
hot embrace of a treasured love?
Will I find death at the hands of another?
I've known men capable of killing.
Having been so inept at living, wouldn't it be ironic if I spent
my last moments flailing desperately for one more breath of life?
Where does my story end? Surely it must.
There is no escape from the darkness that imprisons me now.
in a frenzied dance of lust or in the
hot embrace of a treasured love?
Will I find death at the hands of another?
I've known men capable of killing.
Having been so inept at living, wouldn't it be ironic if I spent
my last moments flailing desperately for one more breath of life?
Where does my story end? Surely it must.
There is no escape from the darkness that imprisons me now.
Published 1st Sep 2023
| Edited 2nd Sep 2023
Author's Note
I'm revisiting this poem I wrote a while back when I had fallen into addiction. Now my feelings of helplessness and nagging desperation have returned.
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2nd Sep 2023 00:03am
Your story will begin when you find true love and have great sex with your true love. Keep on writing you sexy lady.
2nd Sep 2023 6:52am
"Will I find death at the hands of another?" - that was something I prayed wouldn't (and didn't) happen to your mother when she went missing, given the vulnerable state I understood she was in.
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