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Hope(less) Race At A Steady Pace
It's proclaimed that Heaven's a better place
So wouldn't it be logical to hasten the pace?
When the race towards peace seems infinite
Some will erase hope and stop giving a shit
So wouldn't it be logical to hasten the pace?
When the race towards peace seems infinite
Some will erase hope and stop giving a shit
Published 30th Aug 2023
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1st Sep 2023 7:09am
I think you have on one hand...
"Everyone wants to go to Heaven
but no one wants to die..."
And on the other hand...
Atrophy & suicide... (The energy of which
seems to be growing in our society...)
I was just talking about these condos
they listed in my town...
One just sold for 1.4 M...
Right across from the city mission...
Was reading comments in the newspaper...
People seem to think like me...
How they aint gonna do shit...
The other day I paddle boarded to billionaire's row...
Out on the lake...
How these assholes think they own nature herself...
It makes me want to punch reality in the face, if you will...
To be a juggernaut for the poor...
Because fuck you to the world...
(Excuse the rant brother...
Just thinking...
This inspires an idea...
And I appreciate that...)
"Everyone wants to go to Heaven
but no one wants to die..."
And on the other hand...
Atrophy & suicide... (The energy of which
seems to be growing in our society...)
I was just talking about these condos
they listed in my town...
One just sold for 1.4 M...
Right across from the city mission...
Was reading comments in the newspaper...
People seem to think like me...
How they aint gonna do shit...
The other day I paddle boarded to billionaire's row...
Out on the lake...
How these assholes think they own nature herself...
It makes me want to punch reality in the face, if you will...
To be a juggernaut for the poor...
Because fuck you to the world...
(Excuse the rant brother...
Just thinking...
This inspires an idea...
And I appreciate that...)
16th Sep 2023 2:21am
I see what you did there. It's the place where we all want to go but forbidden if you rush your fate.
Great flow.
Great flow.
