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The Phone call
the last thing I did on Earth
greatest regret for being a jerk
not to do the sensible thing
I was going so fast when I heard it ring
slow motion of time. milliseconds of life
wreckage and grief, left the kids and the wife
this number cannot be connected, because
the actions of one who didn`t give a sod
on the back seat was Rover my dog
greatest regret for being a jerk
not to do the sensible thing
I was going so fast when I heard it ring
slow motion of time. milliseconds of life
wreckage and grief, left the kids and the wife
this number cannot be connected, because
the actions of one who didn`t give a sod
on the back seat was Rover my dog
Published 28th Aug 2023
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29th Aug 2023 10:22am
Wow, stark and profoundly tragic, slip.
Wonderfully poeted with a tale of caution..
Good luck in the comp!
🌹B
Wonderfully poeted with a tale of caution..
Good luck in the comp!
🌹B
29th Aug 2023 12:28pm
just how MANY people are using there mobiles at the wheel! I think it deserves public humiliation like the stocks
29th Aug 2023 2:18pm
Very strong. I wish you luck in the competition (the public will decide...........) Regards, Robert.
29th Aug 2023 6:35pm
A rather dystopian tale, thanks for your appreciation Robert I like to support competitions that give the rhyming poet an opportunity to contribute
