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Destroyed
Nights have become eternal, sleep elusive
I lie in the dark in agony
My soul screaming silently
My Soulmate,
My Lover,
My Venus,
My Sun
Is gone
Banished, exiled
I am no longer complete
A vital piece of me now missing
Ripped from my body
The pain so real, so deep, so raw
Knowing I will never see you,
Kiss you,
Touch you,
Be with you
Ever again
Is more than I can bear
Torn apart and left to die
My heart no longer whole
My life force seeps from me
Slowly and agonizingly
Into oblivion
I am destroyed
I lie in the dark in agony
My soul screaming silently
My Soulmate,
My Lover,
My Venus,
My Sun
Is gone
Banished, exiled
I am no longer complete
A vital piece of me now missing
Ripped from my body
The pain so real, so deep, so raw
Knowing I will never see you,
Kiss you,
Touch you,
Be with you
Ever again
Is more than I can bear
Torn apart and left to die
My heart no longer whole
My life force seeps from me
Slowly and agonizingly
Into oblivion
I am destroyed
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Re. Destroyed
Anonymous
26th Aug 2023 4:12am
Welcome to the DUP family.
This is beautifully heartfelt and tragic
This is beautifully heartfelt and tragic
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26th Aug 2023 5:20am
Re. Destroyed
26th Aug 2023 1:04pm
This is a good place to write about it and find fellow travelers....
My sleep sucks too ..
My sleep sucks too ..
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Re. Destroyed
26th Aug 2023 9:27pm
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26th Aug 2023 11:33pm
Re. Destroyed
this is heartbreaking I'm so sorry for your loss of your soulmate 💕 welcome to DU may you find some peace here through writing...
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28th Aug 2023 5:35am
Re. Destroyed
28th Aug 2023 2:49pm
Amazing step in self-psychology by honestly acknowledging and sharing your loss. Hugs and peace, Oral
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28th Aug 2023 8:56pm
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Anonymous
28th Aug 2023 4:10pm
It is through the pain, on the other side of it, one day maybe not understanding at the moment but the realization that in the depths of pain lies beauty of some sort. I pray you find it always. I'm truly sorry for your hurt, the rawness is felt.
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28th Aug 2023 8:58pm
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