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The phone rings
The phone rings,
In my head as I am half awake half asleep
it is not my regular phone
It rings it rings
My mind picks it up .... nothing,
Still, there is this sort of hush sound at the other end
Some sort of weird message from my unconscious?
A message from Outer Space?
I will be very careful as I step out the door.
In my head as I am half awake half asleep
it is not my regular phone
It rings it rings
My mind picks it up .... nothing,
Still, there is this sort of hush sound at the other end
Some sort of weird message from my unconscious?
A message from Outer Space?
I will be very careful as I step out the door.
Written by
robert43041
(Viking)
Published 18th Aug 2023
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Re. The phone rings
18th Aug 2023 6:08pm
Re. The phone rings
18th Aug 2023 7:03pm
Re. The phone rings
18th Aug 2023 8:32pm
Very dear Robert,
I like your poem, but why do you find it strange, the subconscious may receive a lot of phone calls when the person gets careful about his behavior.
I like your poem, but why do you find it strange, the subconscious may receive a lot of phone calls when the person gets careful about his behavior.
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Re: Re. The phone rings
19th Aug 2023 2:10pm
Indeed the subconscious can play all kinds of tricks with you. Especially, I think, when you're in sort of half-asleep, half-awake state. Is the ''message'' then real or just imagined? Is evil just around the corner? nice of you to comment. Regards, Robert.
Re. The phone rings
19th Aug 2023 9:42am
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19th Aug 2023 2:10pm
Re. The phone rings
19th Aug 2023 3:14pm
It's real, especially nowadays when belief in God and goodness is getting rare.
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Re: Re. The phone rings
19th Aug 2023 3:23pm
PS: as to the belief in God (or whatever other name He or She may have) I have small reservations considering that such beliefs lead to so much fighting and hate
Re. The phone rings
19th Aug 2023 7:58pm
If you know Christianity, you don't write about fighting and hate, or HE or SHE.
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Re: Re. The phone rings
20th Aug 2023 2:29pm
With respect: I know more then plenty about Christianity, being born in that faith. If you follow it a bit, i don't have to tell you about the huge $$$$ settlements the Church had to disburse in regard to the victims of pedophile priests. The latest one: 14 million paid. In places like Boston and Chicago the Church had to sell properties to settle. PS: in Rome there is even one special nightclub, well known to be attended by homosexual priests,
Finally, my bit about God being a He or a She ....nobody has ever seen God. It is somewhat presumptuous to declare that it is ''de facto'' a He.
Finally, my bit about God being a He or a She ....nobody has ever seen God. It is somewhat presumptuous to declare that it is ''de facto'' a He.
Re. The phone rings
20th Aug 2023 3:07pm
Very dear Robert,
1- Priests are human beings and liable to make mistakes. No human being is free from mistakes. Why don't you look at Christ and the New Testament. There, can you find anything to blame?
2- God is goodness in its perfection [ Everything good in its perfect form], so He can't be a He or She. However, we use HE because it contains both He, and She and God the Father has begotten Jesus Christ since the infinite time, as a personification of Himself in every aspect "He who has seen Me has seen the Father, and Jesus was and is a He.
1- Priests are human beings and liable to make mistakes. No human being is free from mistakes. Why don't you look at Christ and the New Testament. There, can you find anything to blame?
2- God is goodness in its perfection [ Everything good in its perfect form], so He can't be a He or She. However, we use HE because it contains both He, and She and God the Father has begotten Jesus Christ since the infinite time, as a personification of Himself in every aspect "He who has seen Me has seen the Father, and Jesus was and is a He.
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Re: Re. The phone rings
20th Aug 2023 3:11pm
Sorry. Your answer is just too baloney for me. Perhaps you can go preach elsewhere.
Re. The phone rings
20th Aug 2023 3:37pm
Dear Robert,
I consider you one of the great poets here. I like to discuss important subjects with you so that l get benefit from your experience.
I consider you one of the great poets here. I like to discuss important subjects with you so that l get benefit from your experience.
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Re. The phone rings
6th Sep 2023 5:36pm
The realm between dreams and reality share a limited space that seems to be just as much if not more mysterious.
Good one robert
Good one robert
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7th Sep 2023 2:35pm