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In Moonlight
The darkness of the night
and the brightness of the stars
my hands are searching for
the company of her two soft pillows..
and the brightness of the stars
my hands are searching for
the company of her two soft pillows..
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Re. In Moonlight
18th Aug 2023 3:36am
you make me wanan come and pay you a visit.lol,
really sexy well written short poem
"The darkness of the night
We lie together in the amber glow
the brightness of the stars
with the flickering candlelight
Our passion enticing us to let go
your hands are searching for me
hold each other tight
my gentle caresses
fueling the fire thats blazing inside of you
my soft kisses traveling lower
softly and slowly pleasure
we share one soft bed"
really sexy well written short poem
"The darkness of the night
We lie together in the amber glow
the brightness of the stars
with the flickering candlelight
Our passion enticing us to let go
your hands are searching for me
hold each other tight
my gentle caresses
fueling the fire thats blazing inside of you
my soft kisses traveling lower
softly and slowly pleasure
we share one soft bed"
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Re: Re. In Moonlight
18th Aug 2023 3:44am
Hey MP
this is definitely enchanting... The way you paint a picture of romance, on the soft bed with your erotic words..this is truly mesmerizing. Every line is full of emotion and passion.. Thank you for this lovely words!!
this is definitely enchanting... The way you paint a picture of romance, on the soft bed with your erotic words..this is truly mesmerizing. Every line is full of emotion and passion.. Thank you for this lovely words!!
Re: Re. In Moonlight
18th Aug 2023 3:48am
Maybe I'm the one thanking you
Because your short poem is full of meanings
And you made me dive my imagination into your verses
Your writing deserves support
Because your short poem is full of meanings
And you made me dive my imagination into your verses
Your writing deserves support
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Re. In Moonlight
18th Aug 2023 3:40am
You are glistening In the moonlight trying to find love. Keep on writing.
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Re: Re. In Moonlight
18th Aug 2023 3:44am
Re. In Moonlight
18th Aug 2023 7:19am
Those few lines raise enough imaginative thought as to what he is looking for. "her two soft pillows" - beautiful mammary euphemism.
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Re: Re. In Moonlight
18th Aug 2023 7:21am
Re. In Moonlight
18th Aug 2023 2:09pm
It is always nice to spend time with friends.
Enjoyed your poem of exploration.
Enjoyed your poem of exploration.
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Re: Re. In Moonlight
18th Aug 2023 3:52pm