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THE BENCH
We always end up the same place,you see.
The Dog,the Bottle and I
We always end up the at the same place.
~the bench~
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Drunk Diary
The Dog,the Bottle and I
We always end up the at the same place.
~the bench~
©
Drunk Diary
Published 16th Aug 2023
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16th Aug 2023 2:25pm
18th Aug 2023 7:57am
18th Aug 2023 8:35am
No but I sympathise with the situation you write of & wish I could help that person better manage their addictive cravings. Could they switch to vaping instead, somehow, possibly?
18th Aug 2023 9:38am
Is the reader offering the persona a knife, (to rob their "peace" with) instead of the gun the're holding?!
18th Aug 2023 10:00am
No, not really. I was suggesting that it could be a great idea if the writer could explore cheaper alternatives for getting a mini high. I'll PM ya. 😊
16th Aug 2023 2:49pm
18th Aug 2023 7:58am
Ah!Good old fellow he is!And the bench,not too bad a place to lay the head for a drunk.
