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whirlpool
Even if
a small pebble
is thrown in a river,
it creates a small whirlpool,
similarly
the presence of
someone for a while
in our life also creates a whirlpool
and it's effect lasts for a long time...
a small pebble
is thrown in a river,
it creates a small whirlpool,
similarly
the presence of
someone for a while
in our life also creates a whirlpool
and it's effect lasts for a long time...
Published 10th Aug 2023
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10th Aug 2023 12:16pm
I really like the feel here
Philosophical
Minimalism
It delivers dimpy
BIG LIKE
Philosophical
Minimalism
It delivers dimpy
BIG LIKE
10th Aug 2023 12:21pm
Anonymous
10th Aug 2023 1:56pm
I agree with PoetSpeak. And I’m loving the imagery.
Excellent in its brevity.
Excellent in its brevity.
11th Aug 2023 12:06pm
10th Aug 2023 2:41pm
11th Aug 2023 12:05pm
11th Aug 2023 5:21am
Yes it is does. We also create our own fate. Keep on writing you beautiful strong smart sexy lady.
thank yo very much F for always being here to read me and inspire me. You are my real well wisher. many thanks!
12th Aug 2023 2:06am
11th Aug 2023 8:07am
I'd say the pebble creates a ripple, like that of an earthquake. What magnitude that causes depends on the weight of the stone or the force of the tremor. Emotionally, who really knows the damage they cause when effects can be delayed. Enjoyed this thought provoking piece, Dimpy.
11th Aug 2023 9:44am
Hey snaggy
Thank you for coming by
N yaa agree with this "pebble creates a ripple, like that of an earthquake. What magnitude that causes depends on the weight of the stone or the force of the tremor"
Thank you for coming by
N yaa agree with this "pebble creates a ripple, like that of an earthquake. What magnitude that causes depends on the weight of the stone or the force of the tremor"
