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profound
walked past a young
man today
our eyes met
I asked,
"how are you doing
today."
he responded with
a wry grin
" pretty good. I'm still
here."
Published 9th Aug 2023
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9th Aug 2023 3:59am
Dear BK,
The simplicity of his response is brilliant and reflects everything. I really enjoyed the conversational style of this piece. H🌷
The simplicity of his response is brilliant and reflects everything. I really enjoyed the conversational style of this piece. H🌷
9th Aug 2023 4:50am
You understand perfectly, Honoria.
Thank you. Much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
Thank you. Much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
9th Aug 2023 4:42am
9th Aug 2023 4:51am
9th Aug 2023 5:42am
Love that he even responded, much less with such a perfectly telling quip.
Excellent title along with a great peek into your daily happenings, bk.
🌹💙 - x
Excellent title along with a great peek into your daily happenings, bk.
🌹💙 - x
9th Aug 2023 4:49pm
Thanks you, Blue. One small moment in the microcosm of my day ( sometimes a poem just writes itself).
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
9th Aug 2023 11:47am
9th Aug 2023 5:47pm
My life seems like a vignette. Apparent randomness tied together with the clarity of madness.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
21st Aug 2023 4:08am
I think that the younger generations are going through this viral bout of depression and other mental health issues. Like I ask myself, what could possibly be ailing these 20 somethings? Then again society has been ass backwards lately, so I think he gave a pretty accurate response.
Nicely done.
Nicely done.
22nd Aug 2023 11:07pm
